T2+My+Writing

__Tuesday 10th may 2011__

On 2011 I woke up on a sunny day. My family and I are going to Australia! So we put our bags in the boot of the car. So off we went to the airport.

__Wednesday 11 May 2011__

When me and my family arrived at the airport we waited about 10-20 minutes and of we went into the plane. The plane was huge and every seat had a screen on the back of the seat and we could watch movies programs and even play games.

__Thursday 12 May 2011__

It was boring sitting in the plane for about 2 or 3 hours but the screen kept me going. When we started to land it was the best view ever, you could see the tall towers the hotels the beach and best of all the theme parks. When we fully landed we got out of the plane and we had a little look around. Then we started to look for a car to rent for our trip.

__Monday 16 May 2011__

We went looking for a hotel to stay at. On the way there we saw two theme parks, water world and dream world. When we arrived at the hotel there was parking space under it then we would use stars to get up our room was on the top floor and it had a nice looking view on the balcony. It was also good because this hotel was close to a beach. I started to unpack my things into draws and put my laptop on the bed table. There was a lot of clothes to put away because I am staying here for 3 weeks.

__Tuesday 18 May 2011__

So when we unpacked all our gear we started to have a look at shops and stuff. We went shopping and we brought some pizza for tea and we got some things for lunch. We came back to our hotel and we had some lunch. We had hot dogs with sauce and cheese. Then we stayed at home and watches T.V I was watching WWE but my sister wanted to watch Fashion T.V. So I let my sister watch that. So I was bored so I went on my computer and played some games like minecraft and rubber ninjas. on minecraft I was making a house and killing zombies and creepers at night. I died :(.So I got bored of that and I went to the pools and went for a swim.

__Friday 20 May 2011__ When I was in the pool I noticed there was a spa pool to. I was so relaxed for a few hours. The pool was the most perfect temperature. But I looked at the bottom of the pool and I saw bugs and dirt at the bottom of the pool. So about one hour later I got of the pool and dried of and went back inside in the hotel and got some lunch.

__Thursday 26 May 2011__

We had pizza for dinner we had meat lovers and apracot chicken as well.

__Friday 27 May 2011__

we stayed up until 11:00 watchting T.V and stuff then I went to bed and had a 9 hours asleep in.

**//Quinn, I really enjoyed reading your story because at the beginning the plane flight sounded fun because of the screens, and games. You could explain in more detail what happens on the flight and add more to it. Good Work//**