T1+Persuade

 L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * ====﻿make our position and purpose clear====
 * ====use a rhetorical question====
 * ====include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing====

S.C. We Can
Tauranga Intermedade 30 18th Avenue Tauranga
 * ====restate my position throughout my writing====
 * ====make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics﻿====

Monday 14 March 2011

Dear Mr Diver

I am a student from room 41 Rimu and myself and others think that we should continue having interval time longer. People need to experance what it is like to stay out for Interval for longer like lunch but maybe for not as long though.

Firstly, we would have more time to play sports like soccer and rugby.And it gives you time to get fit and hang out with your friends.Then when the bell goes everyone WILL come to class quicker.And at a assembly students SHOULD be more focest because they have getting fresh air.

And it also gives you and other teachers time to relax and have a coffee or finish marking students work.If you have time you might spend some time with kids playing sports such as touch. If you were a kid like my age I am %100 sure that you would like to have more interval. Well would you?