Explain

__Thursday 19 may 2011__

How to survive and get a seat on the school bus

Do you want to get on the bus safely and not get bullied on the bus. When you read this you will never face the consequences of getting bullied

Well firstly if you are wearing a watch make sure its set to the right time and seconds. So you get a 5 or 10 second advantage to get to the bus stop early. (ONLY do this if your teacher says go when the BELL goes!.)

Some people run to the bus stop without shoes because they say they go faster but remember you add a bit of weight on your bag because of the shoes and socks.

When you are at the bus stop in a line have a drink of water or a apple before you get on the bus. Because if you don’t you will get hungry half way home.But if you can eat on the bus you are fine.

When the bus is arrived get on the bus and look for a seat where people don’t harm you. Or sit by your friend or friends

at this moment you are safe, but remember you need to wait until you get of your bus stop. The best thing is don’t shout or ague on the bus, Because your highly likely to get in trouble or have a fight. If you just sit down until your stop you will will be safe and sound and you will survive the school bus. Sometimes when you get of the bus people pull the fingers just for fun don’t worry just ignore them.

the thing that bugs me the most is walking home. But if it’s raining or any other excuses I normally get a ride home.

And thats how you survive your school bus, so remember to try to do this as much times as you want.

Success criteria

__Tuesday 11 May 2011 __

 L.I. We are learning to use words that contain cause & effect.S.C. My writing  

__Eplation __

the light comes from the sun witch it bollions of miles away.It is made out of lava and boiling hot magma im talking about 1,000 degrees hot its that hot you cant even look at it.

<span style="font-size: 130%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">light is also human made like latens and torches and many more things. <span style="font-size: 130%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light keeps us alive its one of the main things for us to live

<span style="font-size: 130%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Quinn. The piece of writing you have done is okay. You need to remember to use your capital letters and full stops. Also you need to have more cause and effect words. Its good that you have used present tense in your writing and I see that you understand it. Well done. Elise

__Wednesday 4 May____

===<span style="font-size: 1.1em; margin: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 5px;">**<span style="font-size: 13px; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; line-height: 19px; margin: 0px;">L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. ** === ===<span style="font-size: 1.1em; margin: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 5px;">**<span style="font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-weight: normal; line-height: 19px;">S.C. My writing ** ===

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Genrel Statement <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">explation <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">1.where dues light come from?

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">2keeps us worm

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">3our food

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">1:the light comes from the sun witch it bollions of miles away.It is made out of lava and boiling hot im talking about 1,000 degrees hot! light is also human made like latens and torches and many more things.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">2:light kepps heaps of things warm almost every living thing. If there wsent light there would be no life.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">3 :Light also keeps us full no light